In the Just Dutch autumn lookbook, I used the paintings behind the Miffy outfits to organize the email. Readers could browse the collection or jump straight to a dress. Two Mr Maria campaigns show how I adapted the same approach to a product reveal and a side-by-side comparison.
42.39%Average open rateReported campaign average
2.99%Average click rateReported campaign average
At a glance
The brief
Help readers discover the collection and find the item they want.
My decision
Give the autumn email two paths, with a lookbook link for browsing and dedicated actions for individual outfits.
The evidence
Three email samples show the creative. Separately reported campaign averages were 42.39% opens and 2.99% clicks.
BrandsJust Dutch · Mr Maria
ChannelEmail marketing
Platforms in my workflowKlaviyo · Mailchimp
Email performance / Reported averages
Reading the response.
The 42.39% open rate and 2.99% click rate are reported campaign averages. The reporting period, campaign count and performance of the individual samples are unavailable.
Selected creative
Three emails. Distinct stories.
A lookbook, a little glitter and a summer with Snoopy. Each email gives the collection a different way in.
I used the art references to connect the outfits. The email opens with the collection and “Explore the Autumn Lookbook,” then moves into individual pieces, including Melanie’s outfit inspired by Simon Maris’ portrait of Isabella.
Give each outfit its own next step.
Once a reader sees a piece they like, the copy can get specific. “Add Melanie to Your Collection” gives the outfit its own action, while “Shop the Fall Collection” leaves room to keep browsing.
Would readers click for the art story or for the collection itself? I would test the opening copy while keeping the rest of the email consistent.
A / Story-led opening
A little art for everyday life.
Discover Miffy outfits inspired by the artworks behind them.
B / Product-led opening
Meet the autumn collection.
Explore art-inspired Miffy outfits in the seasonal selection.
New sample copy for this portfolio proposal. These variants were not sent as an experiment.
Hypothesis
An art-led opening may give the collection a more distinctive reason to explore.
Test design
Randomly split an eligible audience. Change only the opening headline and copy; keep products, imagery, subject line and send time consistent.
Decision rule
Compare unique click-through rates using the same delivered-email denominator. Review audience size and uncertainty before choosing a winner; track purchases separately where attribution is available.
This is a proposed learning plan, not a claim that an A/B test ran or produced a lift.